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Year 6 Descriptive Writing

In an attempt to develop the speaking skills of my writers, we are planning to record a Voicethread tomorrow that describes four very different pictures. The Voicethread can be seen here although it has been commented upon yet. Whilst they were planning, they came up with some fantastic sentences. To capture the moment, we tweeted them using their twitter account (@Year6Class)

Here are some of the sentences that caught my eye:


Here’s some of the feedback we got during the lesson:


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  1. Mr Addison
    September 30, 2010 at 9:56 pm #

    I love these sentences, it makes me wonder how I can use Twitter in my school…will need to have a think..

  2. Mrs. Skinner
    September 30, 2010 at 10:03 pm #

    It was great fun tweeting with Yr.6!

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